I was at the bar
and looked beside me.
A young black girl
with orange hair
and purple lips
was standing right there
looking at me.
I returned to minding my drink.
I knew from those eyes
that there was something
wrong with her
and I wasn’t very interested
in finding out what that was.
I looked back anyways.
She was still there,
still looking at me.
“Yes?” I inquired.
“You gonna buy me a drink?”
I really didn’t like her face and
her attitude stunk like shit so
“Fuck off.” I said
with the ease of a seasoned veteran.
She gave me the look of death.
I gladly accepted it
and returned to the bar.
“Faggot!” She said
as she shoved past me
really overly-pissed about nothing
so I slammed my drink down
ordered another
and I waited for a
problem to start
with one of her asshole friends.
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Cool! Is this going to continue?
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Yes. I actually have a ton of these that bleed out of me once in a while and so now I actually put them on page. I am glad you like it!
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What’s the point going to a bar if not for a brawl
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Hahaha! I would definitely go to a bar with you, my friend.
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Writing with a black eye is highly recommended!
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Sooooo the story ended how? You got gang raped by her recently released from prison male friends or you simply just went home and jerked off to your Jackson 5
album collection….I’m intrigued….
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It ended in blood, tears, and sirens. Kind of like your typical first date.
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Awesome poem! Love the ending. Keep it up.
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Thank you! I will.
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Reblogged this on iamf8.
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Hey I nominated you for the Liebster award. Check out my channel in an hour or two to see the rules of this award.
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Thank you for the nomination. That is so cool of you.
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Standard night out !! …..for some ?
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hahaha. Yes…it is.
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interesting, that. people should own up to the attention they garner, if they’re going to dress a certain way. then again, i find men do that to me too – stare, and if i don’t respond, say one line, but then angry/confused when that one line is not interesting enough to start a conversation. thanks for following!
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Overall I think that people should think a little harder about the things they do and say. They should consider what the consequences of their actions might be before they act. And no problem.
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