The king sky
wants us all
to bow
today.
The flowers
mercilessly pelted
by the machine-gun rain.
The wind’s
mighty whip
walloping branches
–trees waving like waves.
A lost horizon
whitened,
split by lightning,
brings
to ground
thunder rumbling
–shivering window panes.
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Powerful stuff! Opening stanza sets a great tone. Good image: “machine-gun rain.”
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Thanks, Benjamin! I really appreciate the feedback.
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